A walk in the rain

Just out on my evening walk
up the windin road,thru the trees
soaking in the evening breeze
and then the mist came out to play
flimsy sheets on the trees it lay
as a drizzle and then a pour
spit patches and soaked the road
while i ran to a ramshackle shed
and watched nature's symphony instead

wow

mimi I enjoyed this and here in my woods i can relate to it.

Gloria

oh thats such a nice

oh thats such a nice comment..thank you free spirit

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Love the line "Flimsy sheets on the trees it lay", enjoyable read, thank you,
Dave

thank you Dave,appreciate it

thank you Dave,appreciate it

A walk in the rain

Lovely scenes mimi. I love the rain and your words sink into my heart and allow me to drift from this world.

Last two line superb. Thankyou

thank you..its a lovely

thank you..its a lovely comment,you made here

thank you..its a lovely

thank you..its a lovely comment,you made here

thank you..its a lovely

thank you..its a lovely comment,you made here

mimi

rain walking is lovely...
this piece brought me back to the usual rain back home... nice one!

clairejane

thank you claire...yes i

thank you claire...yes i love the rains too..it can be magical

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