Travelling cheap in the subcontinent

i woke...a haze ...sleepy inactivity
looked out of the train
at the sparse landscape.
Just picturesque eeriness...
a ghostly exaggeration of nature.
The compartment on the other hand
was overcrowded with bodies...sitting..sleeping in all different poses , a jigsaw of accomodation

Aah, the trains

Mimi,

A great description of of an overcrowded train compartment

Thanks,

Dolan

thanks for the read...and

thanks for the read...and the comment

loved this one, mimi...

"a jigsaw of accommodation" - great phrase!

joyce

thank you Joyce for your

thank you Joyce for your comment.i appreciate it

mimi

What an interesting picture you paint with your words in this piece.

Pete

Thankyou Pete...you have to

Thankyou Pete...you have to see it to believe it.. i appreciate your read and comment

mimi

My pleasure!

Pete

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