Travelling cheap in the subcontinent
i woke...a haze ...sleepy inactivity
looked out of the train
at the sparse landscape.
Just picturesque eeriness...
a ghostly exaggeration of nature.
The compartment on the other hand
was overcrowded with bodies...sitting..sleeping in all different poses , a jigsaw of accomodation
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Aah, the trains
Mimi,
A great description of of an overcrowded train compartment
Thanks,
Dolan
thanks for the read...and
thanks for the read...and the comment
loved this one, mimi...
"a jigsaw of accommodation" - great phrase!
joyce
thank you Joyce for your
thank you Joyce for your comment.i appreciate it
mimi
What an interesting picture you paint with your words in this piece.
Pete
Thankyou Pete...you have to
Thankyou Pete...you have to see it to believe it.. i appreciate your read and comment
mimi
My pleasure!
Pete