The loss
Gloria,she sat in her bunglow,
surrounded by flowers and trees
Her garden an enchanting place,
a haven of bird and bees
often i see her that way
and then i see her now
she seems on different pathway
can't relate the two somehow
She was the life of a party,
the first one to laugh and cry
The starter of all things naughty
some one who wiped tears dry
And then i see her sitting
lifeless as one can be
surrounded by women weeping
them she could hardly see
was this somehow her shadow?
accept this, somehow i can't
this women in white,this widow
is she really my aunt?
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It's realy good.
It is realy good and it has left me speachless.
dark heart,thanks
thank you for your read and comment...some times one life can make such a difference
to think of it it is a
to think of it it is a tribute to some one
your poem is very compassionate...
and sensitive, mimi. It combines a haunting beauty with the sadness. Thanks for a very nice poem.
joyce
thank you joyce for reading
thank you joyce for reading and for your comment
wow
you really captured how tradegy changes someone its such a sad thing to witness !
Rosie
rosewilliams
thank you rosie for your comments .i know what you mean.
Very Sad...
It's like her image is still there ..good write mimi~~B.E.Coast
Hello Bryce
Thank you for your comments and the read.I appreciate it.