The loss

Gloria,she sat in her bunglow,
surrounded by flowers and trees
Her garden an enchanting place,
a haven of bird and bees

often i see her that way
and then i see her now
she seems on different pathway
can't relate the two somehow

She was the life of a party,
the first one to laugh and cry
The starter of all things naughty
some one who wiped tears dry

And then i see her sitting
lifeless as one can be
surrounded by women weeping
them she could hardly see

was this somehow her shadow?
accept this, somehow i can't
this women in white,this widow
is she really my aunt?

It's realy good.

It is realy good and it has left me speachless.

dark heart,thanks

thank you for your read and comment...some times one life can make such a difference

to think of it it is a

to think of it it is a tribute to some one

your poem is very compassionate...

and sensitive, mimi. It combines a haunting beauty with the sadness. Thanks for a very nice poem.

joyce

thank you joyce for reading

thank you joyce for reading and for your comment

wow

you really captured how tradegy changes someone its such a sad thing to witness !
Rosie

rosewilliams

thank you rosie for your comments .i know what you mean.

Very Sad...

It's like her image is still there ..good write mimi~~B.E.Coast

Hello Bryce

Thank you for your comments and the read.I appreciate it.

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