mystery

Across the oceans
beneath the stars
our words entwine
to complete a single thought...
funny we don't even share the moon
for when darkness creeps on your side
the sun in spendour spells our noon
when ,where ,how did we find the words to
complete each others sentence as tho we are one person talking

mimi

this is wonderful, the idea of closeness even with distance you represent very well with your words. I really enjoyed reading this thanks. raskin

Thank you Raskin...i

Thank you Raskin...i appreciate your comment..

Mystery

Lovely verse . Am I on the right lines with thought transference and journeys on the astral plain or am I thinking too deeply.
See how you super work is so thought provoking mimi

thankyou

brighttack

brilliant poem

I loved this one and thanks to computers we can have friends all over the World also,hugs from Willow

willow.thank you

willow.thank you

thank you brightattack..you

thank you brightattack..you are generous

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