just a face
That day i saw him stand by the brook
pain and anguish in his look
a face scarred by inner tragedy...and yet when i skipped and missed a step
fell headlong into the stream
the man jumped in to help me out
this kindness in his heart i saw
that made beautiful his outer flaw
each scar like a battle wound i see..
in each mark a beautiful victory..
and then i see him by the brook..
something different i see in his look..
a face scarred by inner tragedy
a face so beautiful to me
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I LOVE this MIMI!!!! It has a sweet touch to it. I always love everything when people can see past the cover on a book! Inner beauty wins again!!! what a fantastic poem!!!
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Linda
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linda
linda you are very sweet..you see i was just reading one of your comments you had made on a poem by someone very new and young poet here ..and i was thinking..here's a good human being..Thanks a lot for your read and comment ...
great one Mimi
What a beautiful poem just goes to prove one should never go by looks and that beauty is only skin deep I loved this one hugs from Willow
thank you willow for your
thank you willow for your wonderful comment...
Mimi This Is Lovely!
This is a truly lovely piece mimi, I love it!
Dave
Thankyou again Dave..
Thankyou again Dave..
the pretty face within
this is so touching mimi... "a face scarred by inner tragedy a face so beautiful to me!"
each people's face hides a true beauty which we need to look closely...
claire
Thank you claire
Thank you claire jane..really appreciate your feedback
Yes
We miss so much when we don't take time to see,when we take people and life at what appears, face value.I really enjoyed this.Good work.
Gloria
Thank you gloria..appreciate
Thank you gloria..appreciate it really,your feedback
Just a Face
The reading of a face superbly phrased in this enjoyable verse mime.My word I enjoy your site.
thank you
brighttack
brighttack
Thank you so very much for your generous feed back you have made me a very happy girl today