dream
Once i dreamt a dream so good
which has days and years withstood
In my dream...
i was walking on a hill so green
the air was fresh and morning clean
some one walked with me i know
for he pointed at the scene below
On hillside three houses lay
the clouds seemed to cover
and then mist away
as i heard a voice by me say
"If you obey me this is yours"
three houses facing north i saw
maize saplings in the garden grew
the land was fertile,this i knew
Till this day i am not sure
why i remember this dream some more
but it is a dream,a dream so good
which has days and years withstood
{Dreams like wispy clouds remain in the heart of dreamers.the mind may say other things but dreams like hope will go on as long as the sun kisses the mountain top and spreads its golden ray.For us it is easier to believe in the sun and the mountains but look at the blind.They too see what we do because they believe in the things unseen.As long as our hearts hold on to the dream,the dream goes on...some fulfilled,others a destination to which we journey on...}
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This is Nice
Mimi,
It must be wonderful to have such promising dreams. All of my dreams lately are freaking weird and suck. Perhaps it's my medication, who knows.
Write on,
Pete
dont remember my dreams
dont remember my dreams usually but this one stayed with me...do you listen to music? you know there is this song by Al Denson "In my prayers tonight", i just love to listen to it,helps me unwind and the lyrics are so beautiful...some how i associate that song with beautiful dreams.
vivid dream
detailed does it mean anything to you, I'm curious? raskin
raskin
raskin,i too am askin...i just wonder sometimes,really i don't know
Discriptive Dreaming
(like the gentlemen above me said) very vivid writing, you painted the scene beautifully mimi~~B.E.Coast
thank you Bryce,for your
thank you Bryce,for your comment...i just like remembering this particular dream.
loved this one
this was a great poem Mimi I often have dreams like that ,
Dreams that re-occur and I especially liked the note caption at the end thanks for sending this one I enjoyed the read hugs from Willow
Thank you willow,you see i
Thank you willow,you see i wrote the note caption you mentioned long ago but didn't know where or how to put it,i am more comfertable writing such stuff,poetry i try but i suppose i am trying harder these days... well about the dream,yes ,aren't such dreams beautiful...thanks for the read and comment
:)
I enjoyed the imagery muchly Mimi...well done...
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from one dreamer to another
dreams are a wonderful thing as long as they are good ones am bit of a dreamer myself hugs from Willow
Thank heavens
thank you heavenoceanic for your kind comments