Closure

The small group sat
in their fold-up chairs,
watching, as the heavy,
clawed bucket was freed to gravity,
and dropped forcefully
onto fresh-mounded earth.

One time.
Thump.

Two times.
Thump.

Three times.
Thump.

It was an unusual way to commemorate.

Perhaps they should have
taken their cue from that awkward pause –
the one just before the Bobcat driver began
scooping up the sweet-soil and
dropping it into the hole.

Thump.

Or when the starch-iron man
hesitated, as if waiting for his own cue,
before flipping a lever and
slowly lowering the container into the ground.

Thump.

It could have been the
fading of the dirge –
as the bagpiper walked through the site,
beyond the site,
well past the site and
over a neighboring hill.

Thump.

Or perhaps the nod and the last word spoken.

“Amen.”

Thump.

There is no telling, really,
when the things of life will end.

Thump.

Closure
© 2009 Mark Pearce

The Granite Garden

has sounds all it own, musical, earthy and sobering. Yet there is a finality in the peaceful serenity of it all. Closure is found there in the granite garden. A place with markers showing us how to find our way back just in case there was something forgotten to be said or a thought needed to be expressed inwardly or openly. Thank you Mark for sharing this poem.

ron

"It ain't what they call you, it's what you answer to." W.C. Fields

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wow!

This was a sobering write! And maybe it doesn't really even end there...I'm hoping there is more....
I really enjoyed this one Mark. Your words are always very well thought out and placed perfectly in a neat and tidy poem!
They always make me think! And everytime I reread it, I get something more out of it!
XOXO
Linda
Nice going!

Thanks Linda. It was based

Thanks Linda.

It was based upon a true story. I wasn't there, but I tried to mentally resurrect the scene and frame it in a meaningful way. I think there are a lot of things in our lives that can be handled that way.

Sorry, but therre isn't more. I think it's my way of saying everyone must come to their own definition of closure.

Mark Pearce
www.marzguy.deviantart.com

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