A poem about that damn so called suicide poem I regret writting
What is poetry?
tell me what it is to you.
For me is a way of expressing my feelings
sometimes bad,sometimes good but always true.
Poetry frees us from our bodies
lets our minds roam a bit.
Shows us new paths,brings us relief
and help us deal with all our shit.
I wrote about suicide,to be saved from that thought
not to kill myself but the inside pain.
Still I can't realise what mess I brought
that I deserves these insults falling like rain.
It makes me sad to think
that people with souls bright.
Say such ugly things and
obscure their light.
For those who say I wrote it for attention
or to get as many reads as I could
I sincerely tell you I had no such intension
and that I simply did what I thought I should
So,I'm sorry about that poem,I really do.
I promise I'll post only creepy stuff from now on.
I'll never ever express my feelings to you.
I'll think of what I think alone.
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regrets
no need to regret a thing you are who you are do to ur mistakes in life, you wrote a poem to relieve some stress and reguardless of what anyone has to say about its how you were feeling at that time,never let anyone take the one thing you have away the power of you thoughts and feeling at the end of the day its all you have this peom is beautiful but write how you choose and never let someone take that away the greatest blessing this piece of shit earth has to offer is our power of mind
God i am sorry
i responded to your poem, I deleted mine and won't be sharing again on that topic
I'm ashamed
I haven't commented on your work before. It is a little extreme, and very dark. Some of it appeals to me, and some doesn't. You have a right to express yourself in any way you see fit. At least you have something to say and it isn't some silly two line, ludicrous rhyme! Never apologize for how you feel and if you feel better expressing yourself, go for it! !~Ron
*"whenever in doubt, dream...inspiration will happen when you least expect it.." r/k 2-2009
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Please my friend
never regret what you write whether it be good or bad as long as it comes from the heart. I too let others (wont name any names) make me feel as if I should not write again or at least I should only write what they think I should, or how they think I should. I am not ashamed of one thing I have written. As far as me still learning isn't that true for us all? Your work inspires me, makes me shiver at times and just thoroughly amuses all the time. Of course we all know that I am almost as demented as you. LMAO. I liked the poem that you wrote it hit close to home for me. I watched my child suffer because of the selfishness of one taking their life as I have suffered through it myself. Write anything you want and the more power to you. If others don't like it then .... them. (please not I did not write the f word)
Total abstinence is so excellent a thing that it cannot be carried to too great an extent. In my passion for it I even carry it so far as to totally abstain from total abstinence itself.
Mark Twain June 11, 1881
:)
thank you very much for the strength you provide me^_^
*big hug*
#Your faithful murderous lolita#