My Brake up poem 2 (WARNING:Insulting language)
I told you I don't fucking love you
what else do you need to know?
At least one of us stays true...
You aren't welcomed anymore in my burlesque show.
You got that right,I am a bitch
oh,yes...and a slut and a whore.
Is there anything you miss?
No?Good...Now get out and close the door.
And where are you gonna go?
Honey, that's not my concern.
tired of all that bow wow,
stop sobbing and at act like a real man.
You got that right,I'm quite sadistic
oh,yes...I'm the squalid type.
You used to complain about the color of my lipstick.
baby,our love was rather rotten than ripe.
I told you a million times not to call
I don't really care if you are sorry
You don't realise I'm over that role
I read too many times the same damn story.
You ask for reasons why
well here they come
It's not like I didn't try
when you took me home.
your mother is a fat, evil hen
she used to judge my cooking.
When I told her not to come again
she insulted the way I'm looking
Oh!And you fuck like a corpse,
you suck in bed.
You're stubborn as a horse,
in brains you're dead.
And there is more,lots of more
You swear at me all the time.
I would also write about that whore
but the words wouldn't rhyme.
Now let me be.
Oh! my lord!
why can't he see
that I got bored.
I would not live with him, except if was gettin' payed.
At least I would have some little gain.
But I'd charge a fuckload of extra,If he got me layed
I'm kidding of course,I'm not that insane.
I hope this time we're done,
yes!...but you can't bear such pain?
Excuse me for a moment,I have to run
and flush the ring down the drain.
Goodbye,it was quite a while
yes honey....I'm a bitch and a slut
keep swearing,I'll add these to my file.
Thank God!It's over...now what?
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NO CENSORSHIP!
Stop flagging poems like this! Don't waste the admin's time! Flagging should only be done in cases of spam, hate-speech, racism, personal attacks on other members of the site, etc. This girl is just writing about being pissed off at her ex-boyfriend, and she has every right to come here and convey those feelings. If you don't like what she is writing, IGNORE IT. Quit trying to have it removed and acting like you are so important and special that YOU have the right to decide for everyone else what they should and shouldn't see here. NO CENSORSHIP!
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It's alright!It's alright!calm down...
it isn't such a big deal.It's just there are people who would point out the insulting language thing and that would make the poem lose its meaning and be branded just as "A poem you don't want to read."
hope u understand :)
#Your faithful murderous lolita#
:)
Don't worry, Mangaka, I'm not that pissed! I just don't like censorship and get annoyed when people waste the admin's time flagging poems like this. I enjoyed your rage here and find insulting language fun sometimes. Keep up the interesting writes!
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thank you very much!I'm really glad you enjoyed it!
I'll check out yours sometime :)
#Your faithful murderous lolita#
I really enjoyed this poem.
I really enjoyed this poem. Though its probably about a more serious relationship for you metioned a ring. This really reminds me how pissed of some of my only 7th grade boyfriends. That is the exact story of how young love ends. I really think that without the cursing that poem would really lose its true feeling of anger. Some people are like you are in seventh grade you shouldn't be exposed to all that cursing. I hear more curse words at one day of school than in that entire poem. I mean after all they are just words to express feeling. Hey mangakafromhell you really remind me of a girl from my school. Her anme is Jessica Lee.
:)
im glad to know that all that cursing makes this poem interesting
*oof! relief* and that you see some of your feelings in it.
Anyway,after all these trouble I've been through I have realised that
i must never take seriously the words "I love you." <---- *don't take this as an advice,i really suck in advising*
Lee you said,funny in that monster of a name I have there is actually a "Lee" (no kidding!)
wow! coincidence <- hope I typed that right
arigato very much (^.^)
#Your faithful murderous lolita#
I want to be
your new best friend.....LMAO. Don't worry about the flag mine got one too. I just means that they don't know what real expression is. I love this poem! Ignore those who will censor you because you don't follow the norm! Can't wait for more.
Beth
PS the fact that this poem is flagged is just gonna make more people want to read it cause we just cant help ourselves. Well done!
Education consists mainly in what we have unlearned.
- Mark Twain's Notebook, 1898
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heh,it seems that you really liked it!That makes me really happy!
feel free to check out and my other stuff,including jeannette forgives-dagger doll tales.I'd really like your opinion^_^
thanks again
#Your faithful murderous lolita#
And they thought I was
twisted and demented!!!!! Great stuff and Just finished reading several of your pieces really great the ones that I could finish anyway! One I however could not finish because of my phobia, next time put a warning in for me " this poem contains Mag......... Grrrr I cannot even say the word. I love the works. I love the passion and the hate. I would love to display some of your stuff on my web page, but only if you are already or after you turn 18. Let me know.
Beth
Total abstinence is so excellent a thing that it cannot be carried to too great an extent. In my passion for it I even carry it so far as to totally abstain from total abstinence itself.
Mark Twain June 11, 1881
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^_^ im very happy you liked them! *happy dance*
unfortunately,I cannot confess my age...(hope u don't get mad on me)
but if you want to post smthn of my stuff in you site,you have all my permission...(just send me a link so I can view it) ;)
#Your faithful murderous lolita#
Ok,
will do.
Total abstinence is so excellent a thing that it cannot be carried to too great an extent. In my passion for it I even carry it so far as to totally abstain from total abstinence itself.
Mark Twain June 11, 1881
Glenn McCrary™: That was a
Glenn McCrary™: That was a very good poem I loved it and I like how u r so blunt and honest and straightforward to the point.