Break up poem (3)-clean version
Why should I try to make you understand?
It's pretty clear that you won't listen to me.
I only ask you to take my hand
and if you want I'll set you free.
Insults and pills,that's what I swallow
as I keep this dreaming real.
You were born to lead,I was born to follow
I was born to die,you were born to kill.
It's all a game,we are mere pawns
we crush and destroy each other everyday
and as the new morning dawns
we stand back up,ready to play.
I don't want to open your eyes
I want to tear off your eyelids so you can see.
All that grief,pain and lies
the dry facts, as dreadful as they can be.
Notice deeds you have forgotten
things you would never repent.
You are candy covered but inside you're rotten
you'll never realise what my words meant.
I'm sorry for you.
I'm sorry for everything and all.
my thoughts are few
excuse me now,I have to fall.
You hate me,well it's okay.
I never tried to please you,
but if you still want to stay
I'll pretent I'm fake so you can feel true.
Your silent mouth,a kiss so cold
regret every moment I spent in your arm
in spite your ages,you act so old
I brought you love,you brought me harm.
You'l never be mine.I'll never be yours
This fills me with sweet remorse
Sadness slowly leaves from my mind's doors
as I remember that you fucked like a corpse.
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#Your faithful murderous lolita#
great poem, so well written,
great poem, so well written, i loved it
*great hug* and thank you :)
#Your faithful murderous lolita#
I'm sure
I'm sure my wife is feeling a lot of these sentiments right now as we go through our break-up. I see myself in several of the stanza's and continue to correct them. It's some really nice writing.
thank you very much....
and i wish you the best ,hope everything turns out well.
#Your faithful murderous lolita#