STILL
I still see you often with my heart
Even though our hearts are apart
I still hear your words with my soul
Even though our words can't console
Your lips still whisper in my willing ear
Sometimes it’s more than I can possibly bear
I still feel your spirit making me feel whole
But being without you is taking its toll
If you were near me and I could smile
This crazy life would make it all worthwhile...
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nice one
Like it. Awww so romantic. Be STILL my beating heart... :)
Yes, master!
Thats me....romantic... thanks for your kind comment. i appreciate it.
Linda
:)
Lovely
I like this, captures the feeling of missing someone very special.
Good write Linda,
Dave
Thanks Dave
Thanks for your kind comment David. So glad you liked it.
Linda
:*)
Here's My Take
Lovely Linda,
You had some definite feelings of loss within this piece but I don't feel that it was one of your better efforts. Especially coming from you it just seemed too generic and been done a million times before. It didn't have that Linda zing in it anywhere. Sorry babycakes but that's this old man's assessment.
Still luv ya,
Pete
you know... youre right
funny, i almost took this off after i posted it...maybe i should anyways or at least edit it. thanks for your honest opinion pete. i can take it, dont ever worry.
linda
I like this one a lot, Linda
You captured the sense of missing someone you care dearly for. And haven't we all been there?
Very sad, very romantic, and very well done.
dear man, tj
thank you very very much. and youre right. ....we have all been there...
i guess i was in a funky mood at the time of this write...the rain and all...kind gets me like that
i appreciate you commenting TJ, thanks again
Linda:*)