~ One Special Star ~
There’s a star up in the sky
It shines for us we can’t deny
This sparkle of refelcting light
A show for us on this special night
Casting shadows through our hearts
We hear the song and the music starts
The angels dance all around our space
We hold on tight in this embrace
This love mingled my life with you
Deep in our souls we know it’s true
A love so sweet, we taste, we feel
By the beat of our hearts we know its real
Angelic whispers with sugared words
The sweetest poetry we’ve ever heard
Our twinkling star gave us a chance
A forever love, in this romance.
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wow
Linda this is a gorgeous, rich poem. I ate up all the words, loved it. raskin
Thank you Raskin!!
Much appreciated!!
Sweet comment!!
Linda
Linda, this so sweet and...
so romantic huh!
claire
I'm so glad
I'm so glad it came across sweetly, clairejane!
thank you for saying that
i apreciate it
Linda
nice..not really,its
nice..not really,its beautiful
thank you
Mimi, my friend, thanks so much
you are sweet to say that!
Linda
Linda....
this was lovely and oh so romantic!!.....it was like an unseen Disney animation...~peace~
Aww..
Repenter..thats so nice, thank you for saying that.
~peace~ to you my friend!!!
Linda
:)
Linda, this was beautiful
You've truely taken my breath away.
You have a flair for romance that is absolutely increadable! And a joy to read!!!
tj
you are so nice....thanks so much
and i always appreciate your comments
Linda
Your an Angel
Only an Angel could write something so beautiful
Ray AKA Yobarney
awww. ray
thanks for the compliment
youre a sweet guy
linda
Two Entrances to Heaven
One highlighted by the stars and moon to guide us in.
Two my password directing me to this site where I can view your beautiful poetry
Take Care
brighttack
brighttack
so sweet of you to say!!
thank you so much
Linda
Wonderful
A poem so perfect I don't know how you thought of it...lovely and true ♥
jewel
thats so sweet of you to say, jewel, thank you very much.
i love it when poems just seem to come together nicely like that one..i wish it would happen more often
thanks again
i appreciate it jewel
Linda
My pleasure
Sometimes you just know when a poem is a really good one, it just forms perfectly and you know it's great...♥