~ My Everynight Dream ~

I dream in pink lace
drifting and dizzying
sweetly, across your face

I dream in satin of blue
wrapping my love around
protecting you

I dream in velvet of green
penetrating our eyes
into aquamarine

I dream in brown mink
softly, warming my body
with you, I think

I dream in cream chiffon
floating, on the top
with you, all around

I dream in white cotton
familiar, just like you
and, never forgotten!

this is an evocative poem

senses are brought to the fore front with the words you have chosen, it is very enjoyable to read. raskin

thank you again Raskin

im really flattered by your comments. much appreciated!
Linda

You shine!

Linda,

This is a poem redolent with color and imagery. This, and "All This love", stand out and suggest that writing in this genre is your forte.

I really enjoyed reading the two, not once, but many times.

Thank you,

Dolan

dolan

You are so sweet to say this. Thank you so much!!!
im pretty happy the way it turned out too... if i can openly admit that...??
you have made my night with your kind comments!!
Linda
:*)

Linda

Nice

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