Meet me Under The Stars
Meet me under the stars tonight
When the moon is full and it shines so bright
You bring the red wine to warm our soul
I’ll be waiting down by the swimming hole
With a blanket to spread out on the lawn
Maybe we’ll stay all night, until dawn
And dream about love and how it could be
If I were with you and you were with me
You hand me a daisy and I like it a lot
Pulling petals off, he loves, he loves me not
We sip our wine and our mouths taste sweet
You bring my face close, our lips they meet
My heart blossoms and fills as never before
This feeling of innocent love, I cannot ignore
We lie down and look up at the stars
The little dipper just seems to be ours
No one, around, it's just me and you
The sky is so black it almost seems blue
This night has been sweet and one I will treasure
Meeting me under the stars, was my pleasure.
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How Sweet!
I think this is a really sweet piece Linda, think you might be getting a few requests for map references as well!! Lol.
Beautiful love poem!
Dave
Dave, Thank you!
Yes, thank you... I was hoping to portray "sweetness" from this poem....I'm so glad you saw it that way Dave.
as far as map references go? ...you know...by the old swimming hole...LOL
thanks for reading it Dave, i appreciate it!
Linda
C U There Babe..
What a sweet write Linda... my wondrous frienda!.. oh,., and i shall bring plenty of wine, so that we could dine, beneath the bright skyline)) And get drunk with the drooping stars afar... u just don't forget to bring the guac, so we can rock, out there in the pahk -BRYCE
I'M already waiting for you...
yes i will certainly bring the guac
but bryce please try not be in shock
I am also going to bring the honey
not for the bees, but for you my bunny
maybe i'll bring the lemon curd too
this under that blanket, all for you
oh, bryce just one more thing
bring that guitar and to me you can sing....
Yes Mam..
This bunny sure does like his hunny.. but Boston skies are way too sunny, the stars not shown... no not just yet, just wait till dawn.. my naughty pet. Yes, bring that curd.. that u refered, and we will mingle like the birds.. i'll bring the strings, and teach a lesson.. then after that we'll start the messin'. But out the house i'll have to creep, while she is sound and fast asleep. BRYCE
Bryce
You are brilliant and funny and so sweet and nice
but all your love poetry is starting to entice
i think it's time now for a sensual write
maybe mascarpone cheese, an Italian delight
its rich and it's creamy a filling of sorts
i do much more with it, than fill in the tortes
i better get going and hurry and post
for you, my frienda, the sweet Bryce E. Coast
Great Idea..
(sensual poet goddess) And I see you've found your next delicious topic ^ _ ^... oh, in my hectic haste in our little frivolous frolic, i wrote dawn instead of dusk{lolz}... Hope I didn't throw off your timing(leaving you alone now) -BRYCE
thanks
thanks bryce, that was fun!!!
Linda
:*)