Love Up There
Do sparks fly?
way up in that sky?
Is there love?
Is there lust?
I must ask why.
With you, I would go
but I just need to know
Would we look down at the stars?
Is there poetry on Mars?
Love Up There
Linda R. O’Connell Copyright © 2009
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There's poetry everywhere, Linda! Even Mars. Let's go there sometime...
You'd be the perfect person to go to Mars with
Neo, I'm ready when you are...just say the word!
Can you tell I've got a bit of writers block? This one seems so juvenile, but t least it was something...oh well.
I'm happy you liked it Neo! Thanks so much!
XO
Linda :)
block
Linda, I don't believe much in writer's block. I think it's good to take time away from writing... It helps keep you fresh. This was a fun piece, and I enjoy your goofy side. Just let your poems come to you! They'll be there in time. :)
i love you Neo!
Thanks for the encouragement! you're right about writers block...i know.
i think i just need a little more blood flow to the brain....off to take a 6 mile walk...
xoxo
Linda
I agree with neo
there's no writers block here Linda, honest! a poem can be two pages or two lines long, it doesn't matter so long as you feel it's ok-which it is anyway! I think there must be a planet of poetry somewhere, where the people speak in rhyme all the time (oh dear, that was bad!) seriously this is so carefree, like a little daydream thought-whee! :D ♥
God, l love you too jewel, aw..i love eveyone actually!♥
thanks my friend! you make me feel like smiling all day!
and i think you might be right about planet of poetry...theres got to be another place where poetry rules!!
Ps i think this poem just might have been a little daydream...
xoxo
Linda♥
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Spread the love hehe! and yes, poetry takes over everything, it's like an invasion-bring it on! :D ♥
~Simple is Classic~
Linda,
I loved this write. It was simply elegant and eloquent. It is those daydreams that carry us to our dreams.
I would like to go to Mars too...please. Martian poetry is really hot!
Warm regards,
Kathy
Martian poetry lol
Is that english? or would we need to study "martian"...not sure i could learn another language....thats why i need to bring along alot of friends from the showcase if we go...
thanks kathy for reading this one. im happy you enjoyed it
XO
Linda
Mission Control
We have lift off in 5, 4, 3, 2, 1 We have ignition. Thank you ladies and gentleman for flying LOC Spaceways to Mars. For your listening pleasure we will have gentle readings by our lovely hostess with the mostess Linda. Moondust and starbursts will be handed out momentarily. Sit back and enjoy :)
Linda when they fly us to Mars they will find that your poetry was far ahead of its time :)
ron
"It ain't what they call you, it's what you answer to." W.C. Fields
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starbursts!! My favorite candy!!
Much better than peanuts!
thank you so much Ron...for such a sweet comment!
i can think of nothing better on a flight than to have poetry read to me...by you and many others...to relax me on the plane...
why havent they thought of that yet?
great idea RON!!!
xoxo
Linda