A Literary Kiss
I think she knew it would taste good to her
like biting in to the juiciest plum in summer
the shiny, dark purple colored one
that begs to be chosen from the bin,
there it is
just staring at you
bulging out his chest so far to be seen over the others
often, you just know it
already your tongue maneuvers delicately to one side
so as not to lose a single, drop of juice
Yeah, she knew it would taste good to her
on that cold winter day
when that poem reached for her
she felt warm and ready
and in his dark purple skinned lips
felt a ripeness never known.
A Literary Kiss
Linda R. O'Connell Copyright 2009
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I like it
Dang!! That's a good one
\\John
glad you liked it john
nice, to start out a sunday morning like this. THanks!!!
xo
Linda
I'll never look at plums in the same way!
oooh, mouth-watering stuff Linda...again! I don't know why but it makes me feel all slinky hehee! I love the picture you see when you read this one :D ♥
all slinky like!!!
that 's a good feeling! glad you found this edible jewel... im not even sure what i meant by it all...hehe..i just kept writing though..
.hmm poetry, i just love it!!
Linda ♥
biting into you
If your poems were food, Linda, I would eat them up in delight. Such a juicy one you are! You and your succulent words!
me Juicy? ♥
I love that Neo! Thank you....seems you know me...lol
thats what i love about poetry...you can be all succulent when you want to!
thanks Neo!
ox
Linda
Love love love...
....I felt like i was reading a love novel Lindz,
very passionate friend!
Luv ya!
xx
Luv you too DebS!!!
Yes,This was part of the "summer series" on love, deBs...lol
You know what I mean by that I'm sure of it!....
Thanks so much for the kind words
xoxox
Lindz
Amazing!
I loved it! I really did! This is amazing! I love how your words are so full of deep emotions, my heart was beating fast as I was reading this poem.
It really is great.
Rawan.
Thank you Rawan!!!
I'm so glad you enjoyed this. Your kind comments are so appreciated!
Thanks for reading and I shall look forward to reading your blog too!
xo
Linda
Hi I'm new here...
Just browsing and read this...very sensual use of language, the imagery flowed like a stream juice, fruit.lips.It was a very subtley sensual poem...
Welcome katrina janine
Thank you for the kind words. I'm so glad you liked this one. I think i might have written this one in the summer...the hot weather always gets to me...
thanks for browsing!!!
Linda :)