JUST TRY
JUST TRY
By Linda R. O’Connell
Copyright © 2009
How do you do that?
Just stand there
And
Take my breath away?
Make me stare at that gorgeous mouth
The one I want to kiss
The one that whispers sweet nothingness
And tickles my ear.
Come on, come over here…
Let me breathe in your skin
Feel me trace your neck with my bottom lip
Softly, until it tingles
Watch me linger around you
And just try.
Try and keep my hands off
That body of yours
Those strong arms that hold me so tight
That supple skin
The embrace I want to be in.
Go ahead
And just try
Just try and keep me away
From you.
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JUST TRY
dreamweaver519 (Nance)
WOW! Linda
This is awesome.
Made me tremble.....for someone to have that kind of impact on you and the visualization
you captured .. Amazing!!
You have a way with words............NICE
Nance :)
Nance
You always say the nicest things. Thank you so much!
I guess I'm just saying what I truly feel as i look at him and it comes out in a write. {i had to make sure and stop at a certain point...}
i appreciate the read and the sweet comments
Linda
Very Cute
Such passion! Very well written piece. I think these are things we all want to say time to time. "Just get over here and let me show you how much I desire you" mentality. Great job on expressing it.
Take Care,
Anastasia Starlena
ANA
Thanks so much. I agree, sometimes you just have to say stuff like that...get over here big boy...LOLZ!
thank you ANA for reading and liking it. i appreciate it
Linda
Restraining order
Linda... Do I need to put a restraining order against you... This is another brilliant write from you ...You draw a picture here of a lustful stare and a strong desire... Great job!
Ray AKA Yobarney
LOL RAY?? restraining order?
The guy im lusting after here is old enough...LOLZ
thanks ray for the kind words...i appreciate it
Linda
WOW
i am speechless... this poem is simply breathtaking! love it love it love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Phillippa
Wow, thank you so much for such nice comments. I'm so glad you enjoyed it. You are very kind. It's fun when a poem "just happens" and pours out. I love that!
Linda