Inside-Out
Turn my body
Inside out
Look around
And all about
See my spirit
See my soul
Watch me breathe
Feel my heart console
Visit me
And stay awhile
Watch me sing
Watch me smile
Observe my mind
And how it acts
Watch me dream
Watch me relax
Study me
Learn what you need
So you will see
From where I bleed
Travel around
Right through my veins
See my joy
Feel my pain
Know me
From deep within
The outside
Is just my skin
Come see
Where I reside
And love me
From deep inside.
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wow poem
well said, personal, lovely all around. This is one I would read more than once, it is good. raskin
Dear Raskin, Thank you
Everytime you comment I have a smile in my heart, becasue you were the very first ever to make a comment on my poem...it was for "the ordinary day" and it was short and sweet but it meant the world to me. Thank you for liking this new one of mine. I appreciate you reading it.
Linda
:*)
Hi Linda
Superb my friend, quite superb.
Take care
brighttack
Hi Brighttack!!!
Thank you for your sweet comment on this one. I always appreciate it!!
Linda
:*)
great Write
I really like this linda.A warn nice feeling to it.
Gloria
Thanks Gloria
I always appreciate your kind comments!!!
Linda
Written with feeling
Linda
This piece is really great. Not like my last one that you and raskin commemted on which I later realiziled was a repeat with a little remixing.
Thats the reason that I'm not writing anything for some time, but reading some, which pleases me much more
Thanks
Dolan
Dolan
Thank you for your comment on this poem.
Which poem of yours are you speaking about? I really do like the way you write, I hope you continue.
Linda
Deleted poem
It was posted thia month and deleted when I realized my gaffe. Hope to start writing sometime soon
Thanks for the support
Dolan
hope
you start again too. raskin