Inhabit My heart

When you kissed me that day
What did you mean by that
I just closed my eyes
And there was no coming back

I couldn't think for myself
My head swirled all around
Your lips tasted so sweet
Thought I’d fall on the ground

I’d never felt it before
That crazy feeling inside
It just swept through my body
And my heart opened wide

You now inhabit my soul
Your name is engraved in my heart
I can’t ever imagine
Us being apart

I found my self lost in your world
The way you moved me that day
Did you know this would happen?
That you would take me away?

I'm clapping linda

love the description of swept away, very fun. Good sunday read. raskin

Thank you Raskin

So nice of you to say, thank you raskin! i appreciate it.

What splendid verse

Linda this is super. It is so nice to see how people can be swept away in such descriptive prose.

Take care

brighttack

thanks

Thank you brighttack, for reading and commenting. i always appreciate your kind words
Linda

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