I Wonder
I Wonder
By Linda R. O'Connell
Copyright © 2008
If I
sing
a song
for you
could I
then
belong to you?
I’d sing
soft and
sweet,
so pretty
to
knock you
off
your feet!
If I
write
a poem
for you
and send it
from
my home
to you.
Would it
be so tender?
Enough,
to make
you surrender?
If I
keep a
secret
with you,
there’d be
no
regrets for you.
And you’d
love
me forever,
you’d
leave me
never!
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Breathtaking
This is a beautifully written piece. Very romantic. I loved the last few lines. So wonderfully stated.
Always & Forever
Anastasia Starlena
Ana
Yesterday, i thought it was time to clean up my blog a bit (some of the erotic ones..) and i took this one off...and all night i thought about it...and how it was one of my first poems...and then i thought about how ive evolved on this site this past year, and i was sorry i took it off. so thats why it is back on...i missed it. lol...thanks you for liking it. i always appreciate your comments ana
Linda:)
NOOOOOOO!
You had erotic poems on here and you took them off! NOOOO! I think I'm going to die!
Ray AKA Yobarney
ray...lol
yeah as ron said, it was a black day at the showcase yesterday when i deleted them... lol
Linda
Missed this particular poem
Linda ,
This is one of few I missed from your archive, glad you decided to repost, beautiful poem.
As for your erotic deletions, you do realize many of those were beautiful also, were presented with taste and enjoyed by many.
I support your decision, but must state for those not familiar, they were great.
Patrick
patrick
thank you for reading this oldie but goodie...lol
i know, now i wish i hadnt deleted them (the erotic ones )...its like i lost some of the progession in my year of writing poetry...i dont think i could repost those do you? i do miss the funny comments i recieved on them. i should have saved those...copied and pasted..they were so much fun and egged me on to write more...oh well
thanks patrick
Linda
Diversity
Linda,
Absolutely I believe you could repost a select few of your poems, they are a part of who you are, they show creativity and diversity, why not show all sides of your nature, most would find them entertaining,and not the least bit offensive.
I believe this may be how we met, and I was a Minister at the time!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Just pullin your leg.
Patrick
Yeah Patrick
I sure "turned you around" didnt I??LOL you quit the ministry after reading the Sand Dunes didnt you?
patrick, youre the best!
Linda
beautiful
Beautiful write linda,I enjoyed reading it..I noticed from the other comments left here that you deleted your erotic poems,that's a shame.they were all so very good..they even inspired me to write a few of my own,heck we even wrote one together.which I'm very proud of might I add! I hope I get to see some more of those,I'm sure there's plenty of people on the site that feels the same way..Ricklovin
Ricklovin...
Thanks Rick. I appreciate you saying that.
And for commenting on this poem. This is an oldie reposted.
Linda
Amazing YOU are!
Linda you know this piece holds a special place in my heart. That was my inspiration for creating a photo that brought you and I to become friends. So I am so happy that you reposted this and this is THE first poem of yours that I ever read.. Now I write too. YOU INSPIRED ME!!
Anyone interested in seeing the photograph inspired by this poem can see it here> http://www.flickr.com/photos/creative365/3200364675/in/set-7215760899522...
creative365 / Guy Hoffman
http://www.flickr.com/creative365
You're pretty amazing yourself!
I'm so glad I found my poem under your picture. It was like it was meant to happen. I'm also glad I reposted this..and the others are coming back on slowly too.
Thank you for saying that I inspired you...You make me feel really great by saying that Guy.
Thank you for the "boost" of confidence you gave me and still give me.
This showcase inspires me AND gives me confidence too. I'm glad you are here and writing also!
keep up the great work!
Linda