~ HOLD ON LOVE ~
You appeared into
My dreams today
The sun never shined
So bright that way
The gentle breeze
Blew across my face
You took me there
To another place
My fingers slipped
Into your hand
And we frolicked off
To a distant land
Through the valleys
And over the hills
This feeling of love
Made my heart stand still
Your eyes softly guided
Me into your soul
Imagine having mind
And body so whole
Running off into
This unknown bliss
Not one minute would
I ever want to miss
We stood and watched
The clouds drift by
And the prettiest pink
Emerged in the sky
Never had I seen
This palette above
Our dreams seemed to paint
This sweet haven of love.
Inside this dream
We did partake
Hold on love
Don’t let us wake!
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Wow
Wow, you certainly have some nice dreams Linda, this was a really nice poem.
Andrew
Thank you so much Andrew
That's sweet of you to say! It was a nice dream, Andrew.
I don't know why but i seem to be into writing love poems lately. I'm sure that will change the minute the wind blows, though...LOL
Thanks for commenting on this one. I always appreciate your thoughts!
Linda
:)
Beautiful Linda
Such a beautiful write, I like this a lot,
Dave
Sweet David
Such a sweet comment, Thank you very much for reading and liking it.
I always appreciate and enjoy your comments.
Linda
:)
your work
Well done....
azeagle31
A31...
thank you very much; nice of you to say.
i appreciate your kind comment!
Linda
:)
Sweet Slumber
Ronald J. Edwards
Trinity Ink
http://trinityinkexperiencestrengthandhope.blogspot.com
yes linda you have been writing some very tender love sonnets
ride the wave :)
ron