~ HOLD ON LOVE ~

You appeared into
My dreams today
The sun never shined
So bright that way

The gentle breeze
Blew across my face
You took me there
To another place

My fingers slipped
Into your hand
And we frolicked off
To a distant land

Through the valleys
And over the hills
This feeling of love
Made my heart stand still

Your eyes softly guided
Me into your soul
Imagine having mind
And body so whole

Running off into
This unknown bliss
Not one minute would
I ever want to miss

We stood and watched
The clouds drift by
And the prettiest pink
Emerged in the sky

Never had I seen
This palette above
Our dreams seemed to paint
This sweet haven of love.

Inside this dream
We did partake
Hold on love
Don’t let us wake!

Wow

Wow, you certainly have some nice dreams Linda, this was a really nice poem.
Andrew

Thank you so much Andrew

That's sweet of you to say! It was a nice dream, Andrew.
I don't know why but i seem to be into writing love poems lately. I'm sure that will change the minute the wind blows, though...LOL
Thanks for commenting on this one. I always appreciate your thoughts!
Linda
:)

Beautiful Linda

Such a beautiful write, I like this a lot,
Dave

Sweet David

Such a sweet comment, Thank you very much for reading and liking it.
I always appreciate and enjoy your comments.
Linda
:)

your work

Well done....
azeagle31

A31...

thank you very much; nice of you to say.
i appreciate your kind comment!
Linda
:)

Sweet Slumber

Ronald J. Edwards
Trinity Ink
http://trinityinkexperiencestrengthandhope.blogspot.com

yes linda you have been writing some very tender love sonnets
ride the wave :)
ron

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