His Dad's Funeral
There he was
Lying there
Dr. O’Hare
Looking like someone else
No one I ever knew
And I was numb
The room was silent
Or it wasn’t
People milling about
Eyes, at gaze
Tears dropping onto
Itchy wool scarves
The stench of
Moth ball sweaters
And dry heat
Touching clammy, wrinkled
Hands
A dark room in which
Flowers abound
Almost burdensome
Hours lingering
Like his disease
Forced saddened, smiles
Mortals uniting with
Souls.
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Sad
and mournful, each word echoing with loss...you captured the atmosphere of a funeral Linda, great job on this one :) ♥
jewel
you dug way back deep into my blog for this one!!! It means alot to me that you went back a year to see this. Thanks jewel. This funeral was my 1st boyfriends dads funeral. i was about 14 yrs old... and scared.
xoxo
Linda
Not that deep
but just a little :) and I remember a funeral I went to, it was my grandad's and I was 7, I didn't know how to act because there were people crying, people braving it out, people trying to look as if they didn't care, so I just kept blank...then cried by myself when it was all over-a sad day :( you're welcome Linda :D ♥