FIRST KISS
FIRST KISS
by linda r. o’connell
He came equipped
With tender lips
A breath so sweet
And impassioned heat
His mouth so moist
Our pleasures voiced
Hands held my head
His eyes I read
A nibbled ear
A nibble there
Tongues explored
We wanted more
Then…
Our braces latched
Now we’re attached
I want to quit
He begins to spit
Get us unglued
We’re so screwed…
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And you say I'm funny!!!
Linda,
This was a wonderfully fun piece that had a splendid progression and a exquisite payoff. Again my mind's eye was treated to an incredible sight.
Write on,
Pete
Good ol' Jimmy
He was cute and it was my first real kiss. As you can see, I will never forget it...we were at a cookout at his house and our parents had to unlock us...kinda spoiled the "moment"...LOL
ps, he had nice lips...lol
Linda
:)
I'm sure Jimmy hasn't forgotten either!
Really enjoyed your poem, Linda. Good job!!!
LOL, you're right!
TJ, as a matter of fact, i saw Jimmy one night at a party and we talked about it....we laughed...he's still really cute...lol
thanks tj for commenting
Linda
LOL
Funny one this Linda, it was not the ending I was expecting, made me laugh though.
Andrew
Yeah, LOL
Andrew, it was wild and funny...and it hurt too...LOL
good memories though..
thanks for your comment andrew, always appreciated.
Linda
BEEN THERE- LOL
Don't worry- ur not the only one... LOL
when i had braces, i was hooking up with this guy and they got attached except... it was at school camp and the teachers had to untie us..... i started bleeding but it was funny at the same time as embarrassing!!!!!
GREAT WRITE!!!!!!
LOL, Kams
wow, at camp...funny!
Gives a new meaning to "hook -up" huh? or an old meaning is more like it...LOL
thanks for your comment kams! its appreciated.
Linda
:)