Dark Chocolate!
Dear chocolate, I love you,
You warm my soul
So sensual
So voluptuous
A spiritual goal.
I swirl you and whirl you
All around on my tongue.
I crave you, believe me
You make me feel young.
Over and under
My teeth don’t dare bite
My lips want you too
And put up a fight.
I beg you,
Don’t leave me
Stay for awhile…
You’re my one and only
You make me smile.
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Nice
If I was a piece of chocolate, this sounds a nice way to melt away, enjoyed this poem Linda.
Andrew
Thank You Andrew!!
Chocolate....I read that chocolate gives us the same feeling as being in love...maybe thats why we let it melt away slow...and savor it as long as we can..LOL
i appreciate the comments Andrew,
no more chocolate for me today...
Linda
good write
good poem, i feel hungry now.
LOL!
thanks Fiona...all you have to do is mention chocolate and im there...LOL!
Linda
Good food poem
Reads on different levels. I like it and I love chocolate. raskin
Yes Raskin...
Thank you, and yes it does read on different levels...
I LOVE chocolate too...i think i could live on it.
Linda
really good....
Im not a chocoholic or anything but your poem may have converted me...lol
LOL
Repenter...youre funny! thank you
i know, this might have a double meaning hidden in there somewhere....LOL
linda