new moon
Bring me a new night
Let this moon shine bright
Replacing my sun
Lets in brace it
Until we are one
Wind blows through my hair
As I run up the hill side
Gliding through the air
No worries no cares
Smell of sweet dew
And grass full the air
Happiness
In every core of my veins
There’s nothing to stop me
A open world is before me
Climbing to the top of a mountain
And jumping again
Having so much fun making my descend
I let you here my howl
Am free for now
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an almost momentous feeling, when you get all high and happy on the simplest of things-awesome capturing of the moment :D ♥
it was a time
i felt total freedom like i could have screamed or do what every i liked and no one would have stopped me
new moon
This is the first poem of your collection that I read. I'm gonna read more tonight, after i switch to my own computer in a few minutes hehe, people here are kicking me out of the office space. Anyhow, one of the reasons i really like your writing in this one, is because i feel an honesty, a peace in your writing... I think that is what it's about, honesty, no matter what you do in life. ok, I'm not good at commenting lol, but there you go
thanks areil
love when someone reads my poems and in my poems is the only way i can some time find peace in my every day life so i try my best to express that. thanks again. lol