Betrayed

It’s all right
Because you have died in my eyes

What I gave you was my trust
What you returned was just fucked up
You kept repeating the same things
That you didn’t mean to destroy our dream
You were the best of my friends
Never thought our friendship would end
I was saved from the enemy
To be killed by a friend

So it’s all right
Because you have died in my eyes

She was going to be my wife
You took away my life
It’s as if you took away my heart
And left me scared
I cried until blood drained
You must have no shame

But it’s all right
Because you have died in my eyes

Closer than my blood
You were the brother I loved
Hatred is what you now have
Now only at the end
Will you earn the right to die and burn
I can no longer stand on this land
Ill takes your life with my hands
The guns fires but there’s no sound
Blood colors the ground

But it’s alright
Because you have died in my eyes

Now it’s my turn
With eyes full of tears
I shot away all my cares

But it’s alright
In front of her eyes both her loves have died

Wow.

This is really good, the emotions are so clear and your flow is so good. I very much apperciate your story here, I think you told it so nicely.
Thanks for sharing this one.

thanks rawan

i tried to make it as clear as possible becuase it has a little to do some of my past. Am happy you liked it

perfect title...

I could feel the emotions as I read this.... but it was this one line that really grabbed me... " I was saved from the enemy to be killed by a friend "... good write, take care-Lee

thanks Lee

thats the line that kind of started the whole poem
and i glad someone found that to be a strong line also
take care also

like it....

hi, great job...there's a spirit in your work...i like the way you express the emotions....
and i also like this lines:
"What I gave you was my trust
What you returned was just fucked up
You kept repeating the same things
That you didn’t mean to destroy our dream
You were the best of my friends
Never thought our friendship would end
I was saved from the enemy
To be killed by a friend"
i can relate myself with this, when once I was betrayed by my friend....

thanks am happy you like it

nothing hurts more than getting hurt by someone you would think would be the last person to hurt you

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