I Can't Think of a Good Title, So Let's Just Read On

Too many nights spent crying,
I finally made up my mind
To stand up for myself
And quit my asinine.

I threw out your pictures,
I burned your love letter,
I deleted your cell number,
Then I felt a lot better.

With only one chore left,
I decided to make it fun.
I ran to the mantle
And grabbed my dad's gun.

I meant it when I yelled,
"I hope you drop dead!"
With a bang-bang-bang,
Hope this deflates your head!

Every girl deserves her day
When she can finally do something
About that undeserving prick;
To be honest dear, you had it coming.

© Liz Perash

BANG-BANG-BANG

is a good title for your piece. :)
but the current one, works as well, made me curious immediately... ;)

Funny!

I *almost* made that my title!! Maybe I'll go back to it, lol.

amazin

iloved it alot =D keep it up =P

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