Comment This Poem
Comment this poem
Or I will be blue
Comment this poem
Or this will happen to you
This equals something bad
Something bad that makes you really sad
If you don't comment this poem
then you will be in my shoes
A lonely person
Who has nothing to do.
You have to go to school and hear something bad about you everyday.
People telling you to go away.
Your heart will be broken
and your tears will be hard to hold in
So comment this poem
I say once again.
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:) this is great. here, i've commented, now please don't do anything bad to me! :P
Hi there
Awww, I feel bad when no one comments on my stuff too. I don't really know why....
~Lili~
A lili in a field
Beautiful flower
You have a voice
You have the power
Take the switch
The one that says ON
Pull it up
That is where you belong
Go where the light shines
Grow in the wind
Bend into sunshine
Blessings I send
Let your heart write, we love you. Be patient...you will blossom.
Warm regards,
Kathy
xo