Wishing for Snow
The Rain, keeps me inside,
and from my room, memories can't hide.
The driving wind is forcing me away,
Only to turn and face,
The importance in you that I placed...
And your smile
was what made it all worthwhile...
A pat on the back,
made me melt inside.
With the consequences
of the things I have done,
leave me thinking
Where has the justice of
my love gone?
Should I continue to fight
all these memories,
to get to a smile I so love?
Should I fight the
rejection in your eyes
or the back
for which you turned?
This is what I face
on rainy days,
with no place to go.
So I sit,
quietly,
cursing the rain,
hoping for snow,
to cover this pain...
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lovely write lee
Lovely write,I feel for you bro...hey by the way,its snowing right now where I live in NY! Keep your head up buddy. Ricklovin
Thanks Rick
Yea, I woke to 4" of snow! or close to it... hopefully enough tht I got the day off,lol.
With the rain and the wind, yesterday was miserable. I was out in it earlier in the day and had enough, was making way home when I felt my thoughts turning, and I had all this spare time to reflect. And I have to say, a lot of these memories are "happy ones", they make me smile, unfortunately this story will always have the same ending. Just mix bad weather with free time,ugh. As time goes by, days like this become further apart. You know the pain, Am I preaching to the choir?lol... Keep your head up too, thanks-Lee
hey lee....
this write holds a lot of pain....and I'm sure many would feel like this about someone at some stage.....I like how it all comes out free and natural...like u never even had to think of what to write next, it just all came out.
thanx 4 sharing
peace
Repenter....
I have to say I don't go through this every day now, but at one time the pain was 24/7. There where times I didn't think I was going to make it through all this. Times are much smoother now, yesterday was a bad day, and I just didn't see it coming. I fought this ALL DAY yesterday and finally had to have some release, so I wrote this. Your right, most if not everyone has gone through this at one point in their life, I have prior to this myself, but this one cut deeper. I wasn't always so sympathetic to seeing heartache in other people, now I know how hard it can really be, now when I see this in other people I take no longer pass it off, not anymore. Thanks for your words,Lee
Lee I know
I know the feeling well too! The rainy days get me down also or even just a gray sky could do it....brings old feelings back, even when I'm happy they creep up on me. That said, I do LOVE the way you wrote this poem. I always love poems from the heart.
Nice
Linda :)
Linda, your right
And I have seen enough of winter, at least the way it is where I live. Jezz, 33 degrees, wind and rain? No, just let it drop a couple of degrees, I would rather it snow! I am going to someone house under the disguise of doing work for him, just hoping the grand kids are out playing in the snow, I am taking an extra pair of socks and shoes,lol. Hey, lets keep this between me and you, ok? later-Lee
LOL Ok, Lee
Between you and me!
My lips are sealed!
Linda
:)
lol lee it snowed down here
lol lee it snowed down here in atl just a few days ago, it was awsome I live, I laugh, I die
Enchanted by snow
"cursing the rain,
hoping for snow,
to cover this pain..."
Wonderfully penned!Touching lines, thanks for sharing.
Best wishes.
A.
Thank you Amaryllis
It is kinda odd that you noticed those last three lines.... This poem was straight from my heart and I was having bad day. The write came easy like any one would that is so emotional charged, but after a few days I re- read it and wasn't so sure I liked how those last three lines flowed, I decided to leave it, Thanks for the notice- Lee