If Only...a Dream

Waking and removing matter....
and destiny of the reminders,
dirt roads that where traveled....
cold frames and turns,
but never getting lost,
in a dream,
reminding me of,
a dream,
of silence that sings,
and colors that gleam,
I am finding my way,
being lead by destiny through change,

if only....a dream.

And beauty and peace abounds
with in shadows cast by trees,
as water plays with rocks,
in a nearby stream.
My effortless search continues
to a thought in which I have fallen,
Love being destiny,

if only....a dream.

And the light escapes the leafs
dancing across green grass,
Where trees that grew in a fashion
for a path predestine,
leading to a little white church
that now only awaits....
The arrival of You.

if only....a dream.

Lee

I have to say this is really beautiful. The images you portray and the sweetness of your words. All so wonderful!
It's nice when a man can show his true feeling like this. You've done a great job here of that!
Linda
:)

Thank you,Linda

When I had this dream, I didn't see myself in a physical being but more spiritual and in the end the "you" was refering to a specific person but now that I take a second look I realize that "you" just simply represents love. I need a ghost writer, I could not give this dream justice, somebody like Cristofo, man where did he go? Or someone like Ron Kinard, Hey! what about you? Thanks for taking time to read, and you comments... and what did happen to Cristifo? Catch you later-Lee

Thats what I love about it!

I love that the "you" in your poem represents "Love". Thats what makes this poem so endearing. because love really is sweet. theres no other word for it in my opinion.
God, I wish I knew where Cristofo went. Talk about LOVE poems huh? he was the master of "words of love" i never heard of...they were all so beautiful!
Cristo...come out... come out... where ever you are...please!
Linda

keep dreaming

the way you made nature seem so playful makes me think of the playfulness when ur in love... laughing and teasing and enjoying each other... absolutely lovely!

Thank you Phillipa

For you kind comments, love is such a strong emotion, when it goes wrong, there is nothing more painful, when it goes right, there is no better feeling. Thanks for taking time to read, take care-Lee

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