Blinking Lights
Four lanes of traffic
that come to a halt...
and the flashing of brake lights,
only seems to put me in a trance,
a reflection of my past,
and snap, I come back,
and its not the right day
for traffic to slow in this way,
but these feelings now want let go,
and traffic is unwilling to move,
only giving freedom for these
thoughts to grow,
and just wanting to get home,
I find myself now trapped in the memories of you,
With no place to go....
and daylight is turning to twilight....
giving more power to the blinking lights,
intrenching thoughts, now focus on pain,
and I watch the white clouds fight with the blue,
and how much importance I put into you,
I slip on sunglasses, for fear I am gonna break,
And I fight with valor, not wanting a tear to waste,
I close and open my eyes,
snapping back, to see dancing lights,
and movement of traffic through
two cars that lay outward,
and debri is scattered,
with no apparent injuries
and no more blinking lights,
moving foward now seems clearer...
and taking off my sunglasses,
I wipe my eyes,
as I try to leave these thoughts
with those blinking lights.
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Heartbreak is never easy
So often heartbreak is harder to deal with when we find time on our hands and we can't seem to keep our thoughts from that person. Well penned. This is a very touching piece.
Nothing good or memorable in life comes to us without first experiencing a little intensity.
--Cherri Oswald
Yea, Exactly
Getting caught in traffic jams is a way of life in my world, I can't count the times I was dealing with this pain and was stuck in traffic. It is slowly becoming part of my past, it is getting better, but some days are tougher than others.Writing has help me, I made a mistake when I took off my previous writes, I put a couple back but I think it triggered those memories. I should have left them, they where hard to read, and had little flow to them,but they marked a path I never want to take again. Thanks for tour compliment, Lee
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I can tell from experience that you were hurting...I love that line,with how much importance I put into you..I felt the same way!! Good write bro,hope it gets easier for you.. Ricklovin
Rick...
Lately I have been lucky enough not to have to spend a lot of time around her, in the past I didn't have a choice, so emotionally I have been able to pull away from her, but there are days that memories seem to just appear, this was one of those days. Thank you for your comments-Lee