A Beauty so Deep (repost from 8/27/2008)
She represents a beauty so deep,
A friendship that divides
Love from lust,
want from need.
Not sure she sees
the want within me...
Two feelings not the same,
creates this world of pain,
and a desire not to hurt,
a desire to keep her free,
keeping this pain inside of me.
She is all things to me
so I hide the pain with in,
for a beauty so deep...
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I really like this one...I can totally relate to this piece,its the same way with the girl I'm in love with...I'm glad you read my poem and decided to leave the comment,and also for reposting this...thanks for sharing bro.. Ricklovin
Thanks Rick
I have read a lot of your post too, and its kinda like when I listen to linkin park or watching Chester singing a song, and the emotion he puts into it. I don't take pleasure in seeing other people hurt this way, but it brings some comfort knowing I am not the only one. Thanks for your read-Lee