All Is Good, All Is Fine
It is all good, it is all fine
Forests to wood, grapes to wine
Tonight on these thoughts I dine
Tomorrow life is surely divine
I sleep well tonight, lullaby night
All right to cite this one sound bite
Pure thought clears the stale water
The sea still rough, it does not matter
What say ye? I do see the light!
When all around me hearts of the night
Stormy weather stirs not my plight
Mending wings from the last fight
How do the rains form from on high?
How do the clouds paint the sky?
Morning Sun rises from the east
Faith the one beat my heart’s feast
Etched high in this golden relief
I share with you my sole belief
Blessed the breath that teaches me
Love came down to set my love free
January 17, 2013
Copyright Leaking Pen 2012
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So beautiful
I love it,Kate
Sleepless nights
Leaking Pen
Dear Kate
Sleepless nights produced this poem, I believe in channeling, a gift came to me
Truly
Paul
Nearer to the dream state
Hello Paul
You were possibly closer to the dreaming mind..a good thing to do at night...with brest wishes.Kate
A Midsummer Night’s Dream
Leaking Pen
Dear Kate
Alas not mine to claim, I am so far removed, His shadows cast quite a wide net, pity me for trying to be caught in his net....hope is etenal n'es pas ?
Truly
Paul
Insomnia
Hey Paul,
A fine poem, mate. I had a bout of insomnia when I moved back to Australia and was starting a new job many years ago. These same thoughts went through my head, as I tried to reassure myself that everything would be alright. You've captured that well in this piece of poetry - well done.
I like the 'feel' of your poetry, but the teacher in me picks up on things here and there, sorry. The third line needs a preposition, as in, "Tonight 'on' these thoughts I dine". Also, the old word for 'you' is spelled as 'ye', not 'yee' (9th line). Little things - not important really.
Other than that, it is all good, it is all fine. You have a great sense of rhyme, and I like the positive message within. The last line is a great conclusion to this poem.
Best regards,
Chris
"Blessed be the breath that teaches me"
Leaking Pen
Dear Chris
If you may allow me to quote from my own words in this poem" Blessed be the breath that teaches me"
I dedicate this line to you, I will one day dedicate a poem just in your honor
but I need to achieve perfection....once I feel confident enough I will gladly boast and post my dedication to you
Truly
Paul
Thank You, Paul :-D
Thanks so much, mate - I'm honored! I don't think I deserve that, but you've put a huge smile on my face; I'm grateful to you :-)
Kind regards,
Chris