Cloths Of Heaven
Who are you? why the mystery?
You write so beautifully,
Why not share all of you,
Complete biography
The rhymes in you so true
Satisfy this old tree girth curiosity
I seek my dreams from your poetry,
Never met a heart so tender so touching
You have an amazing gift
It always gives me a lift
When I am drowning adrift
And in the dumps I am crouching
I shelter under your wings
Love has found its springs
You have an amazing gift
It always gives me a lift
I’ll break the rule add two more lines
Stretch my sonnet life from your shrines
January 18, 2013
Copyright Leaking Pen 2013
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Lovely
Delightful poem.Kate
Missing Biographies
Leaking Pen
Dear Kate
This poem is a response to a poet on this website who is a mystery , he or she writes beautiful heart felt poetry
the only trace besides their poems is no trace at all an absent Bio, I wonder if they are using this site to launch a professional career in poetry? who knows, I believe in transparency , I hope who ever this person is might have chance to read my questioning poem?
Truly
Paul
Brilliant Response!
What a marvelous poem in response to someone's poetry! As for the message, it's good for someone to retain some mystery, isn't it? It makes them more intriguing, but if the mystery is removed, you might discover that they are just another person with a human heart walking the same earth as yourself, and the magic is diminished slightly. You don't want to know how the story ends at the beginning of the book! LOL. But it's a wonderful ode and compliment to the poet in question. I like your sense of humor with regard to the 'author intrusion' at the end of your poem! Ha ha. Well done! :-D
Have a great day :-)
Chris