untitled (suggestions?)

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my heart is now confused
with all that has transpired
I've given you my life
now it smolders in the fire
of the passion you have hid from me
and channeled far from home
and our fireplace is empty
leaving me here throwing stones

i never wanted discontent
or accusations flung
the crumbs you left consumed me
now in ways my caring's numb
but i love you still and deeply
you have changed my view of love
what I thought were my conditions
have been challenged from above

forever till we part, for i gave you my heart
and i cannot let go
i now know
the meaning of unconditional love

this is more of a diary entry

if it is untiled, more often than not, that means I'm writing it on the fly just to work through emotions. i really don't like the last four lines. I'll probably rewrite this

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