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I smell like booze, brews, and bruise.
RETROSPECT: fingers down throat, purging poison
What? YOU WHAT?!
I'm sorry, I do not know the answer.
When I started to feel sorry for myself, I knew that there
was just no turning back now...
when she tried to kill herself... without intention
She's ok now... nobody really knew
anyway
she looked up
'opiate overdose'
in a medical enclclopedia
dated 1959
strong coffee, it said
"WORKS!" exclaimed she
now they won't have to come around with their tanks!
She wouldn't have let them anyway
rather have died.
RETROSPECT:
three alien men dressed in white
NO NO NO NO! Strong coffee
just as it says
"I'll add the green tea"
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I am sorry
Ronald J. Edwards
Trinity Ink
http://trinityinkexperiencestrengthandhope.blogspot.com
what the hell is this about ???
It is written in both first
It is written in both first and third person. It is about an OD. I don't feel much like elaborating.
possessed by the spirit to share
Understood
Ronald J. Edwards
Trinity Ink
http://trinityinkexperiencestrengthandhope.blogspot.com
I have many experiences with addiction and overdose , helping others finding a softer easier way and putting that behind while going forward. Writing is such a great way to "get it out there". Thanks for responding
ron
This is an abstract style.
This is an abstract style. It leaves the reader pondering in epileptic thought. I liked it and enjoy the works of this poet. He's unique and real. Peace, NSF
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Ronald J. Edwards
Trinity Ink
http://trinityinkexperiencestrengthandhope.blogspot.com
Scarecrow,
enjoy your epileptic thought and also, who asked you ? My comment was to the writer, I'd appreciate if you let him explain his work. Let me put it in your NYC way of expressing yourself
" SHUT THE FUCK UP" You feel me ?
Ron, you seem to have a lot
Ron, you seem to have a lot of anger, maybe you should meditate or something. Peace, NSF
peas
Whoa! why the hate?
possessed by the spirit to share
Thanks! She appreciates your comment
I live in the land of epileptic thoughts, so I spew them out at times. :)
possessed by the spirit to share
Hello klonopin
Ronald J. Edwards
Trinity Ink
http://trinityinkexperiencestrengthandhope.blogspot.com
First let me apologize for the banter between the other poster and myself. I meant no disrespect to you. Are there two entities to who I am addressing ? You answered me as “She” referring to another and speaking in her place. I understand and have dealt with split personalities before so it is OK. I was just merely asking what the poem meant to you( you both) so that I could better understand it. Please continue to share
ron
I write in notepad, don't
I write in notepad, don't spellcheck and just leave "as is". I didn't realize until after I'd posted that I'd written about myself in both 1st and 3rd person. I like notepad and never looking back.
possessed by the spirit to share
My Bad
Ronald J. Edwards
Trinity Ink
http://trinityinkexperiencestrengthandhope.blogspot.com
don't look back cause you can never go back
:)
ron
wild shit...
wild shit...