Taboo

Like lava washing over my body
Heated and stinging the skin
Can’t wait for it to begin
Steam rising in plumes
From the friction of two

Moist and wet and making me a wreck
Closing my eyes waiting for the ride
Scorching and torching the scene
As I hold on tight oh I know it isn’t right

Taboo and forsaken just there for the taking
So lovely and luscious and simply delicious
Aroma so sweet I can feel his heart beat
Resistance is way out of reach

The mind says no this isn't the way to go
But the juices have already started to flow
Emotion takes control and as the waves start
This is defiantly not smart

But as he pulls me closer
I can smell his sweet skin
And like a drug it is pulling me in
Dragging me under like an under toe

Will sarcoma to his will and oh what a thrill
Drunk from the passion and lust
The taste is so sweet it fills me complete
So wonderfully sublime I will stay here for some time

Tomorrow I will pay
Hung over from the play
Oh hold on for here comes the pain

Very well expressed...

I really like the passionate, erotic overall nature of this one. This is very well-written, impressive writing. I like the ways you came to convey all of these aspects of emotion, and deep desire. Poetry such as this, (when written well like this one truly is), both inspires and moves the readers in a very powerful, and convincing way. The wording throughout is fluent and highly intense. I found this to be one of my favorites of yours. An excellent, creative write.

"Steam rising in plumes
From the friction of two"- Truly intimate, visually compelling poetry.

Sincerely,
J.P. (Rex)

Thank you

Thank you for your kind words. Keep the feedback coming.

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