She

She has hair the colour of a forest fire,
Burning in the sun.
A deep fiery red at the bottom,
To dark mahogany roots.
She has milky white, almost translucent skin.
Dotted with a constellation of freckles.
She has cold, icy blue eyes,
That light up with a smile.
Intense, astute, taking in everything.
And revealing nothing.
She has a single dimple,
Revealed with her impish grin.
Her eyes crinkling with delight,
Straining against laughter.
She lives, and loves, intensely
Trying to mask the sadness in her heart.

What an amazing piece. You

What an amazing piece. You write with such vivid description! The picture you paint with your words is astounding and haunting, as well. You are a very talented poet! Welcome to this site. Peace, NSF

thanks

i appreciate the feedback, i love your work too. i wish i could write with the same seemingley nonsensical tone, yet have it make perfect sense.

"This Chaos, This Calamity; This Garden Once Was Perfect. Give Your Immortality To Me, I'll Set You Up Against The Stars" ~The Hush Sound

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