Divided Lanes

At that hour just before the temporal break in darkness,
I rose to walk the streets in solitude.
Stopping, I stood with one foot on each side
of the two yellow lines:
The division of West Alameda Avenue.
I watched lights blink from red, to green, to yellow,
And back to red.
A single car sped by,
The only proof that time, too, was passing me.
But in the otherwise silence,
I looked up in amazement at the stars,
Shining so, in spite of the artificial lighting,
And my thoughts drifted back on a certain young man.
I saw a tall, lanky figure
Walking the same avenue as I,
Passing by the world without conviction that he deserved anyone to give a damn
About where he was and where he plotted his course.
Even though we walk the same street,
He walks on one side of the yellow lines,
And I, on the other.
And though i look upon him from my lane with such a longing,
We will never converge;
Like two parallel lanes,
Divided by each's yellow barred reality.

this is very nice, well done

this is very nice, well done

missed connections

The wondering what could have been stings sharply. Well-written and clever poem.

~Masterpiece~

K_McDaniel,

This is very fine poetry! This is a gem. I was extremely moved by your gift of writing. Your thoughts were exposed to print and celebrated.

I am so happy to meet you. You are blessed!

Warm regards,

Kathy Paysen

beautiful

"The amazement at the stars" and how they shone "in spite of the artificial lighting" parallels beautifully with how you feel longing in spite of having a fate that "will never converge" with the one you love.

Diego Fox

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