Waterfall

Those days ran by like rushing water
Roaring over the dam
I was tangled in your hair
And tangled still I am
In those twisting strands
Pouring over the brink
Along your neck
Beyond your shoulders
Foaming on your back in a mist.
So helpless I, but so willing
Swept by the currents away.
Once again I see your face
And hear the rushing water roar
And feel what I've always felt
But feel it even more.

Below the falls,
So far downstream--
Near the whirlpool that calls--
You're all I ever wanted,
All I ever wanted at all.
But all I'll ever have to hold
Is this photograph, so old:
Time standing still,
And us standing together,
Young forever,
Songbirds in a distant summer,
Way back on that endless river.

ooh

Beautifully written, with a tinge of sadness.

Such a happy day

Your comments make my day. So much appreciated,
Thank-you, thank-you

\\John

I agree

with Paul this is a very good poem. raskin

Many thanks

This is such an honor. Thank-you for reading Waterfall.
One day a woman who shared an office with me brought in an old prom picture
She said she wasn't really that keen on the guy with her
But I could tell he was gaga over her
I had a photograph of a waterfall on my desk.
The two kind of flowed together.

Thank-you gain

\\John

Great story

thanks for sharing the inspiration. raskin

Nice

This is a very nice poem...
Everything just flowed beautifully!
I like the first 4 lines the most...
A refreshing approach to describe
the inspiration... indeed!
Very nice!
Eric

Thanks Eric

I much appreciate your comment Eric.
I must admit I drew upon some of my own
Memories for inspiration too-
Been tangled up that way quite often.

\\John

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