I Saw You Ugly
I saw you ugly in a costume
You wore for Halloween;
You had decaying buckteeth on
And the ugliest hair I've ever seen.
I recognized you right away,
Though your face I couldn't see;
Maybe it was how you walked
Or the way you spoke to me.
We went along, you took the teeth out
To show me they weren't real.
When I asked you if I could,
You offered your hair to feel.
It was oily and matted and looked like bugs
Were living somewhere within
You laughed and asked if I noticed
The paperclip used for a pin.
We kept on walking side by side
I liked you ugly or not:
Its what's beneath that matters,
And that shines through, I thought.
Below the surface, I saw beauty
Out for an ugly lark,
And me becoming more and more eager
To be with her in the dark.
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Your Halloween special....
What a giggle... I loved it. If only! x
Cup Cake
Thanks much
Thanks for your kind comment, Cup Cake.
This really happend
Pretty much the way I wrote down
One of those great moments.
\\John
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cool poem, clever i like it!
Thanks
Thanks waterlily,
I am glad you liked the poem.
It is a true story,
I never got to be with her in the dark, tho.
\\John
Very clever poem, I really
Very clever poem, I really enjoyed it!
Thank-you
Thank-you Momo,
I am glad you enjoyed the poem
And I appreciate your taking the time to let me know.
\\John