I Saw You Ugly

I saw you ugly in a costume
You wore for Halloween;
You had decaying buckteeth on
And the ugliest hair I've ever seen.

I recognized you right away,
Though your face I couldn't see;
Maybe it was how you walked
Or the way you spoke to me.

We went along, you took the teeth out
To show me they weren't real.
When I asked you if I could,
You offered your hair to feel.

It was oily and matted and looked like bugs
Were living somewhere within
You laughed and asked if I noticed
The paperclip used for a pin.

We kept on walking side by side
I liked you ugly or not:
Its what's beneath that matters,
And that shines through, I thought.

Below the surface, I saw beauty
Out for an ugly lark,
And me becoming more and more eager
To be with her in the dark.

Your Halloween special....

What a giggle... I loved it. If only! x

Cup Cake

Thanks much

Thanks for your kind comment, Cup Cake.
This really happend
Pretty much the way I wrote down
One of those great moments.

\\John

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cool poem, clever i like it!

Thanks

Thanks waterlily,

I am glad you liked the poem.
It is a true story,
I never got to be with her in the dark, tho.

\\John

Very clever poem, I really

Very clever poem, I really enjoyed it!

Thank-you

Thank-you Momo,

I am glad you enjoyed the poem
And I appreciate your taking the time to let me know.

\\John

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