Happy Moment

Happy Moment

Broken clouds that day
Old Sol found an open space
Sent a friendly ray

Positive

This poem reminded me of those gloomy old days that hang low over us. And then the sun breaks through and makes us happy again. I loved the originality of this writing.

this was a ray of optimism into my day. The sun will always break through somehow.

thanks for sharing this! I really enjoyed it!

Britishkid16

Thank-you

I so appreciate your comment,
I was just out for a walk
And thought of this--so gald you liked it

\\John

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