When She Smiles
She sits among the crowd
does her best to blend right in
she tries to be inconspicuous
keeps her thoughts within
attention makes her fearful
maybe they will see
the positives she’s hiding
or the person she could be...
And then she smiles
and it lights up her face
there’s no where she could hide
when she smiles…
her eyes sparkle and reflect
how does she expect
to hide…
She keeps to herself
rarely says a word
she thinks she’s better off
if she is never heard
but what she doesn’t see
the more she tries to hide
those who care to wonder
are drawn closer to her side
…To see her smile
watch as it lights up her face
there’s nowhere she can hide
when she smiles…
the sparkle in her eyes
makes them fantasize
when she smiles…
She sits behind her walls
safe within her shell
comfort in her own space
keeps things buried well
but when she gives a peak
allows someone else to see
the depth of who she is
shares her personality…
…It makes me smile!
and it lights up my face
the sparkle in her eyes
makes me fantasize…
and nothing can replace
the warmth that radiates
when she smiles…
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John
This is a very sweet write. Mainly because you noticed a smile! I love hearing what guys think and if this special girl only knew huh?
Great poem, maybe you should give this to her...and watch her smile!!
Nice!
xo
Linda
Thanks for your comments
I wrote this about my wife during our "Just Friends" period prior to dating. 20-some years later and I am still facinated to smiles and eyes!
i hear you
John i have been married 31 yrs . We met in highschool at 15 yrs old...
So i know what you mean!
Keep smiling!!! :)
Linda
:-)
Very good piece. It conveys the wonder and beauty of her smile.
Smiling...
Sometimes a smile can say so much more than words. This is a wonderful poem...you convey well how captivated you are by her and her smile. It makes me smile to see how happy she makes you...so sweet!
Jill