Looking at the sky and see the only star

Its a wonderful evening,
but there is only one star
shinning above like a diamond...

a star who capture my heart,
and a star who is unreachable,
just like you...
you're like the star, far above,
who is close to my eyes
but far to have, and touch it...

-jn24-

Nice poem

It is hard to capture something with so little word, but you manage to do it. Lovely and sad poem, you did a great job on it.

Very sweet

And very romantic!

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