Your Time to Choose
Dirty looks
are all you give me,
I don't think you would
if you had to live and be me,
you wouldn't cope,
you wouldn't survive,
you wouldn't manage,
you wouldn't come out alive,
so try and put yourself
in my shoes,
try and look past my face
can you see it, the constant ache...
because it's your time to choose.
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Positively 4th Street
Bob Dylan said it best
" I wish that for just one time
You could stand inside my shoes
And just for that one moment
I could be you.
Yes, I wish that for just one time
You could stand inside my shoes
You'd know what a drag it is
To see you"
nice write Jewel
ron
"things are not always what they seem to be cause seams are in all things"
Thank you Ron
Though I wouldn't know Bob Dylan if he howled in my ear! I like those lyrics though, especially the last verse-thanks ♥
You just have to
start listening to Bob dylan. He is the greatest poet song writer EVER !!!! Try and down load this song Positively 4TH Street and you will see what i mean
ron
"things are not always what they seem to be cause seams are in all things"
You've twisted my arm
I'll "just have" to do that! You're not a Bob Dylan fan by any chance, are you?! ♥
No not really
but I highly suggest you listen to get inspiration from his words. You'll find his voice leave much to be desired but his "words" and meaning behind them are the best ever. You won't be disappointed.
ron
"things are not always what they seem to be cause seams are in all things"
Love it!
I'm sorry if this is something that you have to endure. People can be cruel, but if they were to fall, they'd never make it out alive. Your poems touch me. :)
possessed by the spirit to share
Only sometimes
and, like you say, most people wouldn't survive-thank you so much for you comment, I'm glad they do ♥
Bob
we can all learn alot from Mr. Dylan.... you have to hear him to experience him
"Just because you saw it, do you really believe it happened?"
http://Ron_Kinard.tripod.com/
Hear hear
I've only listened to a few songs by him, thanks to my other friend Ron's suggestion, and hearing it is like a special experience, though you can't explain why...♥