You Can't Beat a Bath
You can't beat a nice long soak in a bath
Feel the warm water soothing your skin,
Every part of you so relaxed
Like happiness is spreading
From your toes to your head.
Stretching and smiling
For a moment
My worries
Desert
Me.
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yup
A good bath is tough to beat, esp a jacuzzi!
Jacuzzi
I've never tried one of those neo, though I must-thank you for commenting on this one! :D ♥
never?
Dang, you're missing out! You must take a jacuzzi bath! They are awesome.
Well I've a phobia about them
the words "neighbours" "jacuzzi" "showing off making me jealous" then "sabotage in the dead of night" are the only things stopping me! the less said the better neo-oh dear! :D ♥
now that could be a poem!
:P
It is....
:P!! ♥
...ahh
relaxation...
Good piece.
Like the exploration into other forms of poetry.
Thanks Paul ☺
I've been in the mood for etherees recently (don't know why!), doing them this way and the other-thank you for commenting :D ♥
Great Poem
Jewel, really enjoyed this poem. I could really feel the relaxation of taking a bath when reading this poem. There really is nothing like taking a nice relaxing bath. Keep up the stupendous work.
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Benjamin, thank you for your kind comment, showers just don't quite do it when you've had a long day....baths are the best! thanks buddy :D ♥