White Shadow of a Tiger
waves of wind
rippling through a grassy sea
the white shadow of a tiger
slinking by softly...
blinking once you've missed him
quickly scanning with your eyes
but still he passes through unseen
invisible now as cloud covers
a once dazzling blue
summer sky.
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If I am right,
a pleasant and funny one at the beginning.
But turning emotionally sad, towards the end.
And a great ending showing the darkness of the present,
comparing to the beautiful past.
Really liked the way you presented it…
Anees.
hey Annes
thanks so much for your comment, the way you interpreted it was brilliant - something you can see which is gradually slipping away. thank you! :D ♥
A white tiger hunter
Have you seen that tiger again?
Ubi vita, ibi poesis!
A white tiger hunter
It is a vivid and paint_like_descriptive picture, Jewel.
Nicely painted...
With warmth,
Iouri
Ubi vita, ibi poesis!
Thank you ☺
Iouri I have seen him again, he's a mysterious one that tiger is....thanks for reading and commenting! :D ♥
WHITE TIGER
i LIKED IT . SO SAD THAT WHITE TIGERS DON'T USUALY MAKE IT IN THE WILD...BECAUSE THEY STAND OUT ...WITH PEOPLE...JUST THE OPPOSITE . NATURE IS A CRUEL BUT BEAUTIFL THING . GREAT POEM .
Hey ronnie
thanks so much for your comment, what you said was one of the things which triggered this poem....how our camouflage can work in reverse for animals. thank you x) ♥