The Dream

I saw the sunset through the mist
And I stopped to listen...
The buzz of the fire-flies hummed softly round
I could hear hoof beats on the ground.
The sun was going down behind the hill
The sky was a graceful pink.
Horses danced to the music in rhythm and pace
Then stopped.
Dusk turned to evening
Evening turned to night,
All I could see
Were the stars shining so bright.
The last thing I heard
Was the whisper of whistles
Though I couldn't catch the words,
I went to bed
And slept until morning,
The dream still in my head.

waw a very emotional piece of art

i liked the way that you had combined with no ultimatums on the way of thinking of life and philosophy in just a dream
i really liked this one
it can easily make you travel from a place to another one by just some seconds
i really loved it

Thank you

Thanks for reading and commenting, I wrote this piece ages ago and I wasn't sure it was that great, but I'm really glad you like it ♥

Another One

Beautiful

Thank you for your comment,

Thank you for your comment, I appreciate it ♥

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It is the things that are most simplest. that are the most Beautiful.
For all it's worth...

I thank

you...if only more people realised that ♥

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