Sunrise
When the sun rises
We are all usually still
Asleep, we don’t see
The wonderful thing that takes
Place just outside our windows.
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When the sun rises
We are all usually still
Asleep, we don’t see
The wonderful thing that takes
Place just outside our windows.
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Golden-red, piercing
Eyes, orange feathers uncurl
As the firebird flies,
As it flies,
Flies,
Fly up firebird,
Fly...
How True!
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Dave
Thank you Dave
I'm glad you think so, I wanted to explain what I thought in a simple haiku/tanka, so that's what I've done...thank you, Jewel
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Thank you mimi
I'm glad you like it, Jewel