a Smile that Lights Up the World

Sound asleep amongst lullaby dreams
drifting amidst silver raindrops
and golden sunbeams,
upon a face you find a smile
that lights up the world,
a simple act that says so much
belonging to just an ordinary girl.

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i like it, i like it, i like it alot!!!
so simple yet so sweet!!
its like a dream description!
nice write JP..

snuggly bug .x.x.

snuggly ☺

Thank you, you're so sweet to say so! ♥

short

but complete and oh sooooo sweet! It really takes talent to write a short poem and get the feelings across, you did this one with supreme taste...yummy!

"Just because you saw it, do you really believe it happened?"
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Thank you ☺

Thanks Ron, now I've read your kind words I feel an over-whelming hunger...quick, where's my emergency supply of chocolate?! ♥

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